“ I think what you wrote was very reasonable. However, what about this?
suppose you added a little information? I am not saying your content is not good,
however what if you added something that makes people want
more? I mean Organizzazione Eventi is kinda boring.
You might look at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create post headlines to get
viewers interested. You might add a video or a related pic or two to
grab people excited about everything've written. Just my opinion, it could bring your
posts a little livelier. ”